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    10/10/2007

    quiet soul of the weeping willow

    inside the depths of soul
    a weeping willow withers
    despair holds on to is heart
    in finding the perfect bloom in reach
    to soothe its lonely parts
    broken by the whistling wind
    howling out its sadness
    the leaves sway and fall
    adding weighted quip to its tears
    its sways and crys its lonely song
    in hope to find its fate.
     
    ( the weeping willow)
     
     
    10:57 PM | Blog it | My Poetry

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    Barbwrote:
    Just me tippy toeing through to see if anything is new..
    I got to read your poem again
    Be Well
    Barb
    Apr. 9
    Barbwrote:
    I came by way of Thotman's site and I must say I am delighted.
    You have a wonderful way of expression .. I have browsed through
    an number of posts and enjoyed every word.
    Thank you for sharing
    Barb
    Feb. 1
    Anitawrote:
    A weeping willow is a beautiful creation, so filled with it's own emotion and longing.  Much like your poem -- lovely and heartbreaking.  So sorry that right girl isn't in your life -- and such a great loss for her.  Namaste ~ Anita
    Oct. 25
    Janewrote:
    How sad....
    Oct. 21
    Rhapsody Fabuliciou​swrote:
    Tears can also be cleansing, so perhaps the weeping willow is going through a transformative period from which it will rise and smile again.
    peace, have a good weekend
    Oct. 19

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