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3/12/2007

Just wrote this.. its kinda raw.

but i was feeling this now. anxiety..

CANDY

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Given the candy of your most addicted desires
Told that you do not touch it
Told if you do its punishment and loss
You will lose that which you hold next dear
But it’s placed before you
Put under a spotlight
And others near you enjoy it freely
Without recourse
At least, without your recourse.

Indulge you must
You cannot resist
It’s harmless to nibble
When no one is looking
You’re allowed to bite
But they watch you most of all
Caught before
Scolded, warned
Whipped

But it brings enjoyment to your day
Enjoyment to your life
Intelligence
And love
You wish they would hide it
Remove it from your reach , your view
It’s some sort of test, conspiracy
A game they play

Today your the target
The mission
CRUEL!
Take it away
It’s better if you do
For all of us
For me
PLEASE!

Inside you know you have the strength to resist
Will to survive
Desire to advance away
Intelligence to know better
Logic to reason it off
But this is emotion
Impossible to control all the time
When your guard is down
Weak

Isn’t it just easier to get punished?
Than to be tortured by the candy
Pain more endurable
Than the internal turmoil
The emotion

Who do you turn to when the only person in the world that can stop you from crying, is exactly the one making you cry?

the one making you cry?

7:28 AM | Blog it | My Poetry

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	KATIA CASTROwrote: *♥♥:♥:♥:♥:♥:♥:♥:♥:♥♥* Hey there, how r u dear friend? Tks for your sweet comments on my space!!! Have a great day, week, month... Heart kisses from Portugal K *♥♥:♥:♥:♥:♥:♥:♥:♥:♥♥* Mar. 31
	POET greenwrote: May your eggs be filled with chocolate and candy, may your days be filled with love and happieness. HAPPY EASTER _______**__________ __________________ _______*__ _____________* _____________________ ________________________ ______________________ _____** ___________ _____________ ____0_____0____ _______@_______ _______________ _____♡_____ _____ XOXO LOVE POET XOXO I hope all is well with you. I have not hear from you in so long. WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU DOING WITH YOURSELF???? Take care and well shall talk soon. xoxo Mar. 30
	Brennanwrote: HGreetings... just stopping by to say HI. Great reading as usual. Will be looking forward to the next one. 'Brennan' Mar. 29
	kïrstin ☼wrote: about your blogging addition?! eh heh heh ... missed it by a mile didnt i? cheesy grin. well, if youre going to miss, miss big. right? poem actually makes more sense that way anyway. oh well ... back to the deep end. s. lizard♫ Mar. 28
	Rhapsody Fabuliciouswrote: You take a deep breath, feel what you feeling, move through it and remember that you are enough. Mar. 28
	Barbwrote: I read your poem and I could really feel your temptation. And yes, at first I did think it was about a woman. You expressed your emotions very well. Anyways, just wanted to say hi. We are fairly close neighbors (in Alberta that is). Take Care. ~HUGGS~ Barb Mar. 27
	celestewrote: hi, i just want to tell u have a great spring !! Mar. 26
	Janewrote: I loved your new poem. I once HAD the perfect mate, but I was sad enough to lose him. Toodles. Mar. 26
	Sethwrote: Just stopping by tosay hello while passing thru BlogLand. Looking forward to another update/posting soon. Take care my friend. HAVE A GREAT WEEKEND! - Seth Mar. 24
	POET greenwrote: ´´´´´´´´¶¶¶¶´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´ ´´´´´´¶¶´´´´¶¶¶¶¶´´¶¶¶¶´¶¶¶¶´´ ´´´´´´¶´´´´´´´´´´¶¶¶¶´¶¶´´´´¶´ ´´´´´´¶´´´´´´´´´´¶´¶¶¶¶¶¶´´´¶´ ´´´´´¶´´´´´´´´´´¶¶¶¶¶´´´¶¶¶¶¶´ ´´´´¶´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶´ ´´´¶´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´¶¶¶¶¶´´ ´¶¶¶´´´´´¶´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´¶´´ ´´´¶´´´´¶¶´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´¶´´ ´´´¶¶´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´¶¶´´´´¶´´ ´´¶¶¶´´´´´´´´´¶¶¶´´´´¶¶´´´¶¶´´ ´´´´´¶¶´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´¶¶¶´´ ´´´´´´´¶¶¶´´´´´´´´´´´´´¶¶¶´´´´ ´´´¶¶¶¶¶´¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶´´´´´´ ´´´¶´´´´¶¶¶¶¶´´´´¶¶¶¶´´´¶´´´´´ ´´´¶´´´´¶¶¶´¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶´´´¶¶¶´´´´ ´´´¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶´´¶¶¶¶¶´´´¶¶´´ ´´¶´´´´´´¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶´´´´´´´¶´´ ´¶´´´´´´´´´¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶´´´´´´´´¶´´ ´´¶´´´´´´´´¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶´´´´´´´´¶´´ ´´¶¶´´´´´´´¶¶´´´´¶¶´´´´´´¶¶´´´ Have a great weekend xoxo Mar. 22
	Rhondawrote: I like this, "candy" can be interpeted in several different ways :) Keep up the good work :) hugs Rhonda PS... LOVE, this line you put after the fact... Who do you turn to when the only person in the world that can stop you from crying, is exactly the one making you cry? Mar. 22
	Jody Lynnwrote: Hello, is that really your name. Anyway, i always thought you were from England. See ya. Mar. 21
	Paulwrote: in actuality this poem was to do with an issue at work where i was addicted to browsing my blog and emails while working ... (yes i love all you guys that much) but i can definitely see how you might thing this poem was about a woman. .. that woman, was in my life, and is not anymore.. its been months.. i ahve dealt withit as much as it will ever be. i am exploring other relationship options now. maybe that person will see me and close the gap, but until then. I'm single, and enjoying a little bit of quiet in my life :) (but not too much) Mar. 21
	kïrstin ☼wrote: your poetry is very good. but your heart is bleeding still. i have no parties to invite you to. no hugs lost in cyberspace ( not to malign the ones sent you way in the least). just this. i know what it feels like to love some one who does not love you in return. in the end i have found that there is more than this kind of love to pursue, and a greater yet awaits you. your friend from the deep end s. lizard Mar. 20
	Karenwrote: Just stopping in to send a hug. xox Smoik Mar. 20
	Sethwrote: Just stopping by again to say hello. Another fine piece you have written. No doubt there. I'll keep coming back as long as you keep writing and positing. Stay safe! - Seth Mar. 18
	KATIA CASTROwrote: Hey there dear friend. I came in to invite you to my party at http://magicfeelings.spaces.live.com/ 20th March is my day... again. I will proudly be 43!!! Can you imagine that??? Don't forget to come in on 20th March and leave me some extra kisses and good wishes! I lv them. See you there... . K Mar. 18
	Sethwrote: Of all my favorite things to do, The utmost is to have a brew. My love grows for my foamy friend, With each thirst-quenching elbow bend. Beer's so frothy, smooth and cold-- It's paradise--pure liquid gold. Yes, beer means many things to me... That's all for now, I gotta pee! -----> Happy St. Patricks' Day! 'Bottoms Up' ;-] -Seth Mar. 17
	POET greenwrote: ´´´´´´´´¶¶¶¶¶´´$¶¶¶¶1´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´¶¶¶¶¶¶ ´´´$¶¶¶¶´´´´´´´´´´´´7¶¶¶¶´´´´´´´¶¶¶¶¶´´´´´´´´¶¶¶¶ ´´´¶¶¶¶´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´1¶¶¶1´´´¶¶¶¶$´´´´´´´´´´´´¶¶¶¶ ´´¶¶¶¶¶´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´¶¶¶¶´´¶¶¶$´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´¶¶¶ ´´¶¶¶¶e´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´¶¶¶¶¶´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´¶¶¶ ´´¶¶¶¶¶´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´¶¶´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´¶¶¶¶ ´´´¶¶¶¶´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´¶¶¶ ´´´$¶¶¶¶1´´´´´´´´HAVE A SAFE AND´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´¶¶¶ ´´´´7¶¶¶¶¶´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´¶¶¶ ´´´´´´$¶¶¶¶¶o´´´´´AND GREAT WEEK END´´´´´´´´$¶¶¶ ´´´´´´´´$¶¶¶¶¶¶´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´¶¶¶¶¶ ´´´´´´´´´´´¶¶¶¶¶¶7´´´´´MY FRIEND !´´´´´´´´o¶¶¶¶ ´´´´´´´´´´´´´´¶¶¶¶¶¶7´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´¶¶¶¶¶ ´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´¶¶¶¶¶¶e´´´´´´´´´´´1¶¶¶¶$ ´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´ø¶¶¶¶¶´´´´´´´¶¶¶¶¶ ´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´$¶¶¶¶´´¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶ ´´´´´7¶´´´´$¶¶¶¶¶e´´´´´´´1¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶ ´´´´´¢¶¶´¶¶¶¶$e¶¶¶¶¶¶´´´´´´¶¶¶¶¶´´´´´´´´´´¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶ ´´´´´´¶¶¶¶e´´´´´´´´1¶¶¶¶´´´´¶´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´¶¶¶¶¶ ´´´´´´¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶´´´´´´´´¶¶¶¶¶´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´¶¶¶¶ ´´´´´¶¶¶¶$1´´´´´´´´´´´´´´ø¶¶¶¶¶´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´¢¶¶¶ ´´´´´ø¶´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´1¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶e´´´´´´´´7¶¶¶¶¶ ´´ ´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´´1¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶ It has been a long time. I hope that all is well with you.* Take care and we shall talk soon xoxo Mar. 17
	Bailey "Boss Lady"wrote: CANDY CANDY CANDY CANDY CANDY - I WANT IT ALL! AND I WANT MY CANDY SMOTHERED IN WHIPPED CREAM AND CHOCOLATE! However... I did read this twice and I must ask... are you actually referring to candy or SEX??? Bwhahaha! ;o) ... Just wanted to pop in and say hello... poke a little at you. ::poke poke poke poke:: By the way - love this entry! Glad to see that you are writing again. And you can always turn to Bailey for a lil 'pick me upper'. That would be me. Over here in WinterPeg, under the snow. Later you! - Bailey Mar. 15

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