The Sound of Cry

Someone help me cry
for if i dont i will try
and then i lose myself you see
the diamond on the shelf to be.

Whispered to me
Dreams of purity
of futures bright and gleamy
but the pressure in eternity

exceeded the dominion
exceeded the test of time
exceeded the fear and the minions
at the end the dream dies every time

wanting the distance closed
sweat blood to become
more than the lump of coal
but the diamond from the dirty road

locked away accross the distance
the treasure is shown
and passed me by again
the heart and the sound we own

Inside me beats forever
the sound of joy inside
caged by lifes hatred
becomes the sound of cry

Someone help me cry
for if i dont i will die
because the joy inside
needs to be free with a lie

someone help me cry
before the pain consumes
the sound of cry inside
and becomes the outside sigh

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	Sissel Åsenwrote: Hello Here is my gift for you this weekend. Have fun <P align=center><a href="http://lessis1.spaces.live.com/"><img alt="Love from Sissel" src="http://img81.imageshack.us/img81/5647/fromsisselgc1.gif" border=0></A></P> Love from Sissel Feb. 23
	Bailey "Boss Lady"wrote: (`'·.¸(`'·.¸¤¸.·'´)¸.·'´) «´¨`·..¤* HELLO ¤..·´¨`» (¸.·'´(¸.·'´¤*`'·.¸)`'·.¸) Yes it's me again... checking in on you. Looking for more good o'l poetry to ponder over. I see you haven't updated since Feb 10th. Huh? Huh? And your problem is?? :o) Gosh Golly! Make a woman wait. waiting waiting waiting waiting BRB Feb. 18
	Stephwrote: ¤´¨) .·´ ¸.·¨) ¸.·¨) (¸.·´ (¸.´ ¸.·´ `·-*¤ Greetings sweet thing you! Couldn't pass up an opportunity to come by and say H E L L O. Was hoping to read something new. Thanks. Such beautiful writings!! I look forward to your updates. Huggs - Steph! Here's hoping that you enjoy this Sunday, cause tomorrow is another Monday. Aaaargh! Well at least for me. LoL Feb. 18
	J.WESLEYwrote: *Sorry, but I don't see you in a vision crying....I see a most honest man. Your obvious talents are much respected.* *J. Wesley* Feb. 17
	Tinwrote: Nice poetry! And lovely background music. It's so exotic~ Feb. 17
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	Chuckwrote: Hi, stopping by to say hi and read some of your poetry. Take care. Feb. 14
	Joelle Sawanwrote: ❤•·.·´¯`·.·•๑•·.·´¯`·.·•°o.❤.o°•·.·´¯`·.·•๑•·.·´¯`·.·•❤ ❤•๑•❤HåÞÞ¥ Vålëntînë'§ Ðå¥❤•๑•❤ •๑•Løvë Më•๑• •๑•Kî§§ Më•๑• •๑•Hüg Më•๑• ❤•๑•❤HåÞÞ¥ Vålëntînë'§ Ðå¥❤•๑•❤ Håvë å Fåntå§tîç då¥... (¯`·.·´¯) (¯`·.·´¯) `·.¸(¯`·.·´¯)¸.·´ º°`·.¸.·´º° Wîth løt§ øƒ løvë ƒ®øm ❤ßëßë❤ ❤•·.·´¯`·.·•๑•·.·´¯`·.·•°o.❤.o°•·.·´¯`·.·•๑•·.·´¯`·.·•*❤ Feb. 14
	kïrstin ☼wrote: sad indeed, bastol. but dont lose heart. love can come when you least expect it. sometimes we have our sights set in one direction, and love hits us from another, and we never see it coming. s. lizard♫ Feb. 13
	Bailey "Boss Lady"wrote: (¨`·.·´¨) (¨`·.·´¨) `·.¸(¨`·.·´¨)¸.·´ ×`·.¸.·´× Happy Valentine's Day Thinking of you! Feb. 13
	Christawrote: Hello there!! Just passing by to say hello and to see whats new. Happy Valentine's Day to you. Take care!!! Fr: Christa Feb. 13
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	Maria EL Khazenwrote: •·.·´¯`·.·•°o.O●●O.o°•–––--–•♥♡♥♡♥♡•––––-- •°o.O●●O.o°•·.·´¯`·.·• MaRaya Was Here http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a147/marayaaa/RomanticValentine.jpg ...Have a lovely week... •·.·´¯`·.·•°o.O●●O.o°•–––--–•♥♡♥♡♥♡•––––-- •°o.O●●O.o°•·.·´¯`·.·• Feb. 12
	Bailey "Boss Lady"wrote: Life was so much easier when our worries were when recess was too short... desicions were solved by eni meani mini mo... only skineed knees brought tears... boys were yucky and goodbyes meant tomorrow. If you love someone tell them... because hearts are often broken by words left unspoken. - ok ok... I know I know... shut the hell up Bailey! (pssst... I'm off my meds) Muah! Bailey Feb. 12
	Bailey "Boss Lady"wrote: Hello you! Stopping by to say my 'hello' and to hopefully read another one of your poetry works. Glad that I did stopped by. This is another beautiful and very well written piece. But oh so sad at the same time. ;o( Hhhmmm. Sorry to hear that you are feeling a little 'blue'. You never lose by loving. You always lose by holding back. You have this girl wondering why it is that you cannot meet this person.... call me nosey... cause I am. ;o) (trying to make you smile) Take comfort in knowing that your msn friends are thinking of you. - Bailey. Feb. 12
	Paulwrote: almost like a response to that challenge tamara had. :) but wasnt my intention Its partially in mourning of the person whom i will never meet. but mostly i was just sad.. the music in the background was the inspiration. Feb. 12
	kïrstin ☼wrote: the speaker in this poem sounds heartbroken. as if there is a love to give, and no one to give it to. close enough to touch, far away enough never to reach. s. lizard♫ Feb. 12

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