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    2/4/2007

    A Weavils Choice.

     

    Felt a bit rushed, but I'm trying to find a way to make my videos a bit more appealing visually .  I know I'm hot, but  cant let  you females  get  so excited without reprieve :)

      

    A Weavils Choice

    What wickedness lurks inside
    sweet succulent evil
    with every breath a choice denied
    and our heart shrinks to a weavil

    is choice the greatest good
    is choice larger than that
    out path is set in wood
    we can shape it and wear it like a hat

    is choice the greatest bad
    endless like the deep blue sea
    if it is its kind of sad
    but life's a ship we can sail it, you and me

    when truly your heat speaks
    a choice is ever clear
    sometimes the love you seek
    is something very near

    never when you give a damn
    would you ever see it
    not clearly, motionless, just as gentle as a lamb
    it slaps you in the face, twit
    until you stop looking, just belive and feel it

    9:24 PM | Blog it | My Poetry

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    ~bj~wrote:
    Beautiful.........
    Hope you have a beautiful day
    ~bj~
    Feb. 14
    Ladder Jockey, Deanwrote:
    I have been meaning to drop in ... really I have.  Glad that I have taken this time too.  Great poetry.  You've got talent that is for sure.  The vids are pretty cool too.
    Yay... like what she said below... keep writing and we'll keep coming back.   Enjoy the weekend.   - Dean
    Feb. 10
    Sasswrote:
    Keep expressing and we will keep coming back...
    ~ Sass ~
     
    Feb. 8
    Stephwrote:
    Greetings... thought that I would slide up beside you and say 'hi'.  I see you have been busy writing again, lucky for us.  :o)
    I really like your videos - keep 'em coming!  
    Be back soon.  Enjoy the rest of your week, Friday is almost here.   - Steph!
    Feb. 8
    Paulwrote:
    tamara, i have experienced this . so this is defintely soemthign that can and already has been written about.
    I will even attempt to write soemthign new and post up a multiple read.
     
    please do me a favor tho and swing this comment on over to the challenge section so i dont lose track of it :)  thanks hun !
     
    Feb. 8
    Tamara Hodderwrote:
    Like usual, I really enjoy your poetry.
    I see that you have a place where you can be "challenged" to write something.....
    So, how about this....
     
    About a love so strong that it hurts because of the distance between the two lovers. Everything they do to be together fails and they suffer miles apart. They become hurtful to one another because the pain and frustration of being apart makes them sabotage the love they have.
     
    Are you up for it? Not sure if you can write about something that maybe you haven't experienced. So there ya have it ~ you've been challenged....

    (¯`v´¯)
     `·.¸.·´
    ¸.·´¸.·´¨) ¸.·*¨)
    (¸.·´ (¸.·´ .·´¸Tamara¸.·´¯`·

    Feb. 7
    Brennanwrote:
    Wow!!  Just thought that I would take a few minutes to check your space/blog out.  Must say that I too am impressed by your poetry.  I believe in giving credit where credit is due.  Me... I still start my poems off with Roses are red....  LMAO
    So, congratulations on being so creative!   Cheers      /Brennan
    Feb. 7
    .wrote:
    Hi,
     
    In answer to your question, its actually quite easy to embed YouTube videos into your blogs now.
     
    When writing a new blog entry, just jscroll down the page & click on 'Embed Videos'.
     
    You then enter your prefered video code & then press save. That should work when you exit the 'edit mode view'.
     
    If you're still not sure got to this site who's one of the developers for Live Spaces.
     
    Take care.
     
     
    Feb. 6
    Paulwrote:
    thanks hun,  always the best of friends. *big sqweeze across the miles*.
     
    I love hearing your comments, but now you made me curious to how you see things as you belive to see them through my eyes ..
     
    Feb. 5
    POET greenwrote:
    Hey sweetie,
     
    I really like this one, keep it up. You are a great POET and i hope that you know that. xoxo
    Sometimes you make me question my writing, not a good thing for me. lol
    I enjoy reading you thought's and how things are seem through your eyes and your soul.
    Take care xoxo
    Love POET xoxo
    Feb. 4

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