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    1/15/2007

    Clarity - Response to a challenger

    click me to play the video
    This poem and the corresponding video log is dedicated to  the amazing shrinking man and  Tanya the amazing shrinking woman.
     
    another first... a video response to a challenge. 
     I'm just full of firsts lately. and if your up to firsts... I am single and open minded ( lol but also chosey )
     

    wind whips by
    branches announce their snap
    ground rises to the challenge
    rocks assist and bump
     
    Rapture found in pathless woods
    escape from civility
    challenges abound do not slow you
    physicality is easy
     
    Left turn,right Turn
    a little more brakes
    downhill,  up hill
    sweat pouring off your face
     
    Silence in the noisy city
    it echoes in your head
    peace fills your empty heart
    as you pump and sweat
     
    Wheels spin round and round
    vibrating with the earth
    airborne as you take the jump
    flying like a hawk
     
    your mind was filled
    and now its clear to see
    as you land and catch your breath
    cycling sets you free.

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    Wayward Billwrote:
    Brother Bastol,
    Yes, I have been away far far too long.  That problem has been remedied and I am moving on with my life and renewing my place here in spaces.  I hope that during my absence I did not offend anyone who stopped by and commented.  If you are one of the many new friends I picked along the way and never have gotten to, Welcome!
    Peace, Love, Hippie Stuff,
    Wayward Bill
    Feb. 19
    POET greenwrote:

     Take my hand and lead the way;
    tell me all you want to say.

    Whisper softly in my ear,
    all those things I want to hear.

    Kiss my lips and touch my skin;
    bring out passions deep within.

    Pull me close and hold me near;
    take away my pain and fear.

    In the darkness of the night,
    be my beacon, shine your light.

    In the brightness of the sun,
    show me that you are the one.

    Give me wings so I can fly;
    for I can soar when you're nearby.

    Enter my heart, break down the wall,
    it's time for me to watch it fall.

    I've been a prisoner, can't you see?
    Break my chains and set me free.

    Strip me of my armor tight;
    you'll find I won't put up a fight.

    Release my soul held deep within . . .
    I'm ready now, let love begin.

    Jan. 25
    Paulwrote:
    no problem , a lizard kiss would be fun.   Its just lately those cut and paste games are getting out of hand, and longer and wider and larger.. and it drowns out all the legitimate and soulful comments on the site..  like spam does to an email box..
     
    preppign up another video entry  this week.  stay tuned..
     
    Jan. 22
    kïrstin ☼wrote:
    the cyber kiss was just part of a cut and paste game. sorry :(
    i thought since you were having firsts, a kiss from a lizard might be a nice first to add to the pot :)
    wont leave any more, as you request. ☻
    s. lizard♫
    Jan. 21
    Pid Qwrote:
    say HI from Thailand. Take care!!
    Jan. 20
     
     
     
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    Hiya Again Bastol,
    Thank You For The Vote=O)
    You are so very Sweet.
    Big Time Hugs and Warm Smiles in your Direction....
     
     
    Shannon
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    Jan. 19
    Lindawrote:
    WOW!
    you ARE talented...!
    keep it up...
    Okay...here's a topic..... "soul mates"
     
    I enjoyed going through your archives, etc... some of your writings give me goose-bumps....
     
    Thank you for sharing!
    Linda
    Jan. 19
    Paulwrote:
    romantic devotion is my specialty
    ;)
     
    Jan. 17
    Hey you... just had to stop by again.  Been thinking of you since I left your space earlier.  Was wondering... when you have the opportunity too...    
    ... I am wondering what words you would use to express 'Devotion'  - one soul to another.  Curious.  OK DAMN IT... I am asking you to write something.   LOL  I won't push you.  :: poke  poke  poke ::  HaHaHa
    Jan. 17
        *      I am so glad that I found my way back to your blog.
        ¸.·´ I must tell you, I really like your video.  It is  
     .·´  very original and very well done.  ::appluase:: to you!
    (    ... YOU HAVE ONE MORE VOTE... mine.  :-)
     `·.¸   Poetry should be like fireworks, packed carefully and artfully,       
     ¸.·´             ready to explode with unpredictable effects.
    (_¸.·*·.¸¸.·´`*      You have talent.   Enjoy your week!  - Bailey
    Jan. 17
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     Thank you for the vote .  I appreciate it.  I didnt kinow that you write poetry. Nice poem.    IREALLY do need to get to know more people and what they are about .   I,m a little lax..lol   But, forgive me......I,m just an  old g,ma with 17 grandkids  and no time to remember to tie my shoes
    Jan. 17
    KATIA CASTROwrote:

     

    Hi there!!!
     
    I came in today to bring you a fantastic art performance from Jerome Murat
     
    If you never saw this, be sure you will never forget. The end part is so so so incredible.
     
    And the message is trully deep. I hope you like it!
     
     
    See you
     
    K
    Jan. 17
    Paulwrote:
    SPence : thanks for the tip, but i like having the users able to do the youtube ratings and comments as well.
     
    Silverylizard :  as much as i appreciate the affections. that particular  (much) is a bit much.. try to keep them under 20 lines.. scrolling for 10 mins to read one line of text is rather annoying when your pressed for time..
     
    i ahve removed a few others entries because allit contained is the aschii art that was super long..  and to be fair i should remove yours too, except you actually posted a comment as well so your safe for  the moment.. :)  as a general rule here people.  keep teh aschii art  short.. they are pretty, but i prefer conversations..
    :) or real flowers sent to mey home,  money  works too.
     
    Jan. 17
    Sorry Bastol, The address below taken from your embed code at youtube Will open like this "Click here" Just use it the same as the link's you are using now.
    Jan. 16
    Hiya Bastol, I like your video entry's "Won my vote".  Here's a little tip. If you use only the address from the embed code of your video you can open your video's in a large screen. Below is the part of the code you use Click on it to check it out. Good Luck.From Spence.

    http://www.youtube.com/v/6HbYCfAivks

    Jan. 16
    peggywrote:
    Hi,
    I just came from Spaces Hall of Fame where I voted for you under Poetry.
    Good Luck, Gentle B.
    Jan. 16
    Sethwrote:
    Just doing some blog hopping and thought that I would 'click' in to see if you had written anything new.  Annother great piece!
    Must say - great videos too!  You've got some talent without a doubt! 
    Keep us the good work.... check back with you again soon!
    Jan. 16
    You have email!
    Jan. 15
    POET greenwrote:

    http://spaces-hall-of-fame.spaces.live.com/

    don’t forgot to vote xo for me pleace

    Jan. 15

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