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    1/11/2007

    MY FIRST ONLINE LIVE READING

     

    Tell me what you think (  in case this is broken and i have to tweak it you can also use this link

    or copy and paste this  ( http://youtube.com/watch?v=6HbYCfAivks )

    and yes I was nervous..

    * runs and hides *

    p.s.  video comments and  comments here are welcome. Tips and pointers also encouraged I wont take anything personal that is presented in a sane and rational way .

    Comments (19)

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    Stephwrote:
    «--­(‘’)--« Hello «--(‘’)--«
     
    ... Loved it!  Very well done.  :: applause  applause::   Muah!
    Jan. 28
    Sissel Åsenwrote:
    Hello
    I'm here to give you a little weekendgift
    <P align=center><a href="http://lessis1.spaces.live.com/"><img alt="Love from Sissel" src="http://img254.imageshack.us/img254/6808/lillawc0.jpg" border=0></A></P>
    Love from Sissel
    Jan. 19
    Sasswrote:
    You work is very beautiful and the way you presented it on video was moving...Ones poetry is a personal one, a porthole to ones soul...Thank you for sharing, very much enjoyed and will be back to see and read more..
     
    ~ Sass ~
    Jan. 17
     
    Bastol,
     
    Oh" Thanx so very much for the vote on SHOF=O)
    I already had My vote promised to someone=O(
    But you are very classy not to have voted for yourself.
    I really enjoy your space and hope to get the chance to vote for you in the future.
     
    I hope you are having a great week and are staying warm.
     
    Big Time Hugs and Warm Smiles in your direction Bastol....
     
     
    Shannon
     
     
     
     
     
    Jan. 17
    ferhat topalwrote:
    Merhaba from Turkey
    Jan. 17
    Iris Sparrowwrote:
    Hi there,
    Just passing through & thoughts I'd say Hello. Your You tube poetry was awesome !
    Have a great week ;)
    ~Iris
    Jan. 15
    Kimwrote:

    εïз Hey hunni,

    Just popped by 2 wish u well & leave u a little pressie. (¤˛¤)

    http://img465.imageshack.us/img465/9806/mizangel2nd3.gif

    Take care

    °¤° (((Kim))) °¤°
    Jan. 15
     
     
     
     
    Bastrol,
     
    Hi =O)
    I am Shannon.
    I am Just passing through  Spaces,
    I watched you on Video..
    Pretty cool...
    I'm Gonna have to give that a try. 
     
    Monday, Monday Monday! 
     
    Words of the Day from this Crazy Chick...
    Being Crazy Keeps Me Sane!
    I don't suffer from insanity. I enjoy every minute of it.
    Double your drive space. Delete Windows! ...OYE!...LOL
     
    Don't Forget That
    Voting Starts Today On SHOF
    For Best Poetry
    For Most Friendly
    For Most Entertaining-*wink
    Please go and Vote for Me or Some other deserving Space.
    Don't forget to check out all nominee Spaces before placing your vote.
    You will be surprised how hard it will be to choose...=O)
     
    Big Time Hugs and Giant Smiles to you....
     
    MUAH!
     
    Shannon
     
     
     
     
    Jan. 15
    Paulwrote:
    of course im excited to be nominated.. and thanks.. I try to keep the site original and unique.. I have more coming..
    Jan. 13
    What I meant was I have you nominted over at SHOFame for Best Poetryt Space.. LET KNOW if that's cool with ya!  OK buddy!
    Randy
    Jan. 13
    Sethwrote:
    Hey, checked out the video... very well done.  You've got talent without a doubt.  Keep writing... keep reading!
    Jan. 13
    I got you and your space in in time! Good for me! I did something right for a change..lol...
    Randy
    Jan. 13
    Ok little buddy! I see now!  I so tired that I at times over look sometime!  So I'm going ahead a put your nominatyion in for best peotry!!  You don't seem to excitied about!  Your live reading ws fine, and I don't see any other spacer DOING that on thier space! woo hoo  You go boy!
    higs
    Randy
    Jan. 13
     I trie to post this and could get i to post!  So just spank me man! lol Don't get upset... this is just a suggestion my friend OK!!  For you PLAY WELL!!!
    I have a big suggestion for ya little buddy!  You play very well!  But for the constructive bit... hint, hint... You seem to be a little nervous about making a mistake, and it's taking away from your emotion you putting into the piece.. classical music is HARD.. I know, but YOU PLAY VERY WELL MAN... suggestion~lighten up.. forget you being recorded, and play... play..play..a nd if you hit a wrong note.. screw it.. most people unless they have a trained ear.. don't know the difference..lol... But you play well... Ilove the Tears In Heaven as well..
    See later kiddo... KEEP ROCKIN!
    Randy
    Jan. 13
    Hey little buddy!  I LOVED this Video.... and the personal read was GREAT MAN!  I see no fault in it! Oh the kitty cat is lovely!  And keep at the piano my friend.. it gets easier, and easier.. I haven't heard you play... but if you play as well as you read your poetry..well.. enough said.. it rocks!  cool!
     
    Listen.. I nominated Jolie at Spaces Hall Of Fame, for best Poetry... But I forgot her space is private... that one anyway's!  And I thought of you, but didn't have your space URL! If you have a space with your peotry on it, or is it on here.. I didn't look very well.. I am So RUSHED.. the world of music is demanding, esp. when you working with a working band.. God.. exhusting to say the least... I whining! lol
    But anyways's If you'll let m know SOON before it's to late.. I will run over to SHOFame and nominate you for Best Poetry.. If you don't mind.... And leave me the URL where you have your poetry.. If it's not private.. then I can nomiate ya' little buddy!  ok!
    Well, will look to hear from you!  Oh, I put Video up.. It's a first... Music editing I CAN DO.. film editing.. whew.. that a hell pit for me.. Well, better go before I write a book here.. and you keeop rockin' & writing too.... I would hate to see good talent go to waste!
    BIG Rockin' Randy Hugs,
    p/s
    Give the kitty Cat a pet for me!
     
    Jan. 13
    kïrstin ☼wrote:
    ya sure ... if i knew how
    s. lizard♫
    Jan. 12
    Paulwrote:
    Thank you very much .
    It would be fun to see some video responses from my fans :) *hint hint*  that i may better meet them and know them
     
    Jan. 12
    decem girlwrote:
    It was good, Paul.  I played it twice... You have great talent... and as silvery said.  there is definitely a hint of deeper feelings.  Kudos, my friend.  Hugs ~Lainey~
    Jan. 12
    kïrstin ☼wrote:
    very nicley done, bastol! i think it flowed, and carried a hint of a deeper feeling running beneath the surface. i hope you do this again ...
    s. lizard♫
    Jan. 12

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